The real Pein (Nagato)

Subject: The real Pein (Nagato) Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:48 am

heey everyone,

Soooo.... this is the site where I looked.
http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/436/16/
I tried to shade it a bit but i havent got much time now
so the shading comes soon
C+C please ^^
and here it is :
(it is a bit big so it is in the spoiler xD)

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Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Fri Feb 20, 2009 1:06 pm

It looks pretty Basic , Add more effects and Shade. 7/10

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:15 pm

Yeah. Great improvement. But you still need to add more strings and other things.
7/10

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:44 am

*updated

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:49 am

Add bandages around his upper hands.

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:13 am

updated again
more shading
add bandages

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:53 pm

Great...9/10 Ftw...

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:53 pm

Looks like it's made from pure silver, try to grey it up more.

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:46 am

I should grey all silver things a little ?
or his body ?

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:40 pm

Maybe make the silver more dull. It looks too shiny.
And maybe have the silver shading jaggered, not square.

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:53 pm

Wow...dzdzdz69 , You do Sprites?

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Mon Feb 23, 2009 9:11 pm

Yeah, he does (and he *cough* kinda sucks at them) but this one is his best so far I reckon.

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:45 am

jon it isnt his sprite -.-
its mine ...

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Tue Feb 24, 2009 8:41 pm

I know it's yours...

What are you talking about?
I was meaning dz, not you.

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Wed Feb 25, 2009 12:27 am

Eh, what?
I dont do these sprites.
I do not know what Rion just said.
OFFTOPIC.

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Wed Feb 25, 2009 7:28 pm

I thought Rion meant that statement by you being good at sprites cos you criticize them good, but nah! You're not

You get it now?
Who cares -.- ....

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Wed Feb 25, 2009 7:58 pm

I think it could use more colors overall

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Mon Mar 02, 2009 10:04 am

ok i was bored and animated him ...
just made it quick so it looks a bit weird hehe xD
but you can give me tips what i should fix
and how i should fix it ^^

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Mon Mar 02, 2009 9:43 pm

I don't think he'd move that fast and that much, slow it down and lessen the movement.

Subject: Re: The real Pein (Nagato) Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:56 am

that cool 8/10