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Kazamari Anime Noob
Number of posts : 13 Age : 31 Points : Warning : Registration date : 2009-02-23
| Subject: Sprite Archive! Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:04 pm | |
| First Sprite I made but I dunno what to make now? Crit? Suggestions on a new sprite? | |
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.:+R+:. SOS Brigade Co-Chief / Co-Admin
Number of posts : 192 Location : Unknown. Anime Group : Anime Group : SOS Brigade Points : Warning : FC : SOS Brigade Fanclub Registration date : 2009-02-13
| Subject: Re: Sprite Archive! Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:16 pm | |
| Pretty good, I suggest you fix the abs and if possible add more dark shading.
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Kazamari Anime Noob
Number of posts : 13 Age : 31 Points : Warning : Registration date : 2009-02-23
| Subject: Re: Sprite Archive! Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:46 pm | |
| Like this? | |
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.:+R+:. SOS Brigade Co-Chief / Co-Admin
Number of posts : 192 Location : Unknown. Anime Group : Anime Group : SOS Brigade Points : Warning : FC : SOS Brigade Fanclub Registration date : 2009-02-13
| Subject: Re: Sprite Archive! Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:15 pm | |
| Ehh, I would suggest less abs I don't think sprites should be the ripped. | |
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- F.E 'Kyzee Keyblade Master
Number of posts : 239 Age : 27 Location : In My Room , GOSHH! Anime Group : Fully Equipped Points : Warning : Registration date : 2009-02-15
| Subject: Re: Sprite Archive! Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:47 pm | |
| Yeahh , The Angle of it is Strangee. 6/10 | |
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j0nt0bi SOS Brigade Chief / Admin
Number of posts : 186 Age : 28 Location : NZ FTW! Anime Group : Anime Group : SOS Brigade Points : Warning : FC : SOS Brigade Fanclub Registration date : 2009-02-13
| Subject: Re: Sprite Archive! Mon Feb 23, 2009 9:09 pm | |
| Left TIT (LOL) is like, drooping down, and the abs aren't supposed to stretch that far, it's only supposed to be on the middle of the lower half of the torso. Hands are too big too.
7/10 | |
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Kazamari Anime Noob
Number of posts : 13 Age : 31 Points : Warning : Registration date : 2009-02-23
| Subject: Re: Sprite Archive! Wed Feb 25, 2009 3:45 pm | |
| The hands aren't too big I purposely made them large cause of the gloves and it just looks badass to me | |
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.:+R+:. SOS Brigade Co-Chief / Co-Admin
Number of posts : 192 Location : Unknown. Anime Group : Anime Group : SOS Brigade Points : Warning : FC : SOS Brigade Fanclub Registration date : 2009-02-13
| Subject: Re: Sprite Archive! Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:51 pm | |
| Ok abs look normal, but left chest looks a bit big. | |
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j0nt0bi SOS Brigade Chief / Admin
Number of posts : 186 Age : 28 Location : NZ FTW! Anime Group : Anime Group : SOS Brigade Points : Warning : FC : SOS Brigade Fanclub Registration date : 2009-02-13
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Kazamari Anime Noob
Number of posts : 13 Age : 31 Points : Warning : Registration date : 2009-02-23
| Subject: Re: Sprite Archive! Wed Feb 25, 2009 7:56 pm | |
| hows that? | |
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yakoca Anime Noob
Number of posts : 54 Location : ThaiLand From Asia Points : Warning : Registration date : 2009-02-21
| Subject: Re: Sprite Archive! Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:57 am | |
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