Effort: 9/10
Balance: 6/10
Speed: 6/10
Picture: 8/10
Overall: 7/10
Crits:
The unfinished one seems to be a bit fast, and jpeged.
And the frames on the people are going everywhere.
Balance it out.
Yeah, and all of the writing is sought of too fast to read. I didnt even know what it said.
Maybe when some people jump, you could make a crouch frame,l instead of just running when they just fall down.
The drawing is sought of dodgy.
But it's great.
Add a Background.